I remember the first meet,
I remember the first talk,
I remember the day,
Which really put me a lot?
I remember the day when I came to know,
I fall I love deep below,
I remember the feeling deep inside,
I reached the zenith leaving everything behind.
The internal beauty which embraced me,
I remember the anxiety which graced me,
I remember my first love,
I remember which fortress me….
THIS WAS MY FIRST POEM WRITTEN ON 18TH OF AUGUST 2008…… .DEDICATED 2 MY LOVE
its a sweet poem...
ReplyDeletei like it...
keep on writing.....:)
just keep on.... :-)
ReplyDeleteso nice... pahle pyar ko salam..
ReplyDeleteitna likho ki... kuch bhi adhura aur akela na rahe............
thanks....
ReplyDeleteNice ..... well expressed..
ReplyDeleteExcellent. You have reflected a sad reality through his eyes.